Over the recent years, the usage of flights for travelling is tremendously raised. However, some people say that it causes serious pollution and major hassles due to the reason of world's fuel resources utilization are in vigorous. I do think that this is susceptible constituent and agreable, which is restricted one.
To begin with, nowadays air traffic and air travel becoming more popular and it can cause serious pollutions, menaces occurs for health moreover due to the air travel it started an air traffic, following these get factor to arouse a very critical surrounding. Furthermore, the unemployment becoming stagnant, which leads to job opportunities are susceptible for educated ones. Subsequently, a well equipped system with well ventilation arranged on a flight, owing to the technological advancement, if any complaints are occurs in the machines of flight, the employees being a part of it. As a result, high number of flights have been created and air traffic can also arises. To be specific, very recently due to the air traffic, the Russian aeroplane crashed one with other indeed, so many are died the fuels and fogs are expanded more, the sea region is fully eroded with poisonous chemicals.
Ostensibly, however these threats should be eradicated that is the notion and it to be applicable one. Firstly, awareness of government to instruct some rules and regulation to protect the environment from some harmful fuels and noise pollution. Secondly, air traffic cost should be high, so because the travellers used to go by other low price alternatives such as roadways and rail ways. Finally, stringent laws should be unweired and to protect the legacies, although the management plays a bigger solution to save money among the people in order to achieve their life goals like an insurance policy.
In conclusion, try to cease air travelling in order to prevent the fuels and pollution, because it can cause harmful diseases like respiratory distress, chest infections and heart attacks. Hence, space craft should be restricted to use a bit on the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 668, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'arise'
Suggestion: arise
...e been created and air traffic can also arises. To be specific, very recently due to t...
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Line 5, column 433, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nally, stringent laws should be unweired and to protect the legacies, although th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18694362018 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86764510089 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605341246291 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0506527638 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.857142857 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266280654832 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841180680498 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468163633565 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164445631967 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432590522665 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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