Healthcare should always be funded by governments, and it should always be free for people
to use. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?
Few topics are more important than a nation’s healthcare, and the issue of payment will probably
always be controversial. It seems to me that the sheer cost of universal, free healthcare makes this an impractical
aspiration, no matter how much we might admire the idea.
The main obstacle would appear to be the number of recipients of healthcare compared to the
taxpayers are who need to fund it. Especially in countries with ageing populations such as Europe, the tax
burden on workers becomes intolerably high, and can eventually stifle economic growth. These painful lessons,
shown by states such as France, seem to demonstrate that completely free healthcare is economically
unsustainable. A further issue relates to the cost of modern medicines, which can be extremely high if the latest
drugs are used by health providers. This means that the cost of providing treatment rises almost without
limits, making the permanent supply of free treatments unaffordable. One final point against this proposal is
the added issue of globalisation, by which people move increasingly freely between countries. If this means the
taxpayers of one nation are now obliged to fund the healthcare of users from many other nations, this is surely
a further significant factor which clearly makes a universal health service impractical.
Admittedly, I agree with those who argue that free a health service is a worthy ambition for a country
to have, and that we should all contribute something to the welfare of our fellow citizens. However, this
aspiration suffers significantly when confronted with financial reality.
To summarise, it seems reasonable for the state to fund as much as possible of the nation’s healthcare.
However, due to demographics and costs, this needs to be supplemented by other methods, such as private
insurance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43986254296 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07555721906 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618556701031 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6131842265 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.769230769 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 7.06120827912 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2522871296 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749602602219 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325387773975 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064465565697 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507897848735 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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