Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative impacts on social relationchips. Do you agree or disagree?
The technological advance has brought several chages in the way people communicate with each other. Many people argue that state-of-the-art commuinication technology might exert a grave detriment to human' s interaction. However, I still belive that the inscreasing prevalence of modern technology have both positive and negative influences on social relationships
on the one hand, it is understandable why some people argue that mordern communication technology can pose a threat to human' social relationships. As a matter of fact, the non-stop progress of technology has unfolded the possibility of socializing virtually with everyone, which gives people countless opportunities to make friends on the Internet and interact with each other by computers rather than face to face. This might gradually impede the development of social skills and greatly damage social relationships if people spend an excesscive amount of time socializing in the virtual world . For exemple, instead of mixing with their peers. many young people now are becoming addicted to making friends online who share the same interests. As a result, a majority of yungsters now have a wide social network but very few meaningful relationships which they can rely on to overcome some setbacks of their own lives.
On the other hand, cutting- edge technology also brings some practical benefits to users. Technological breakthrough has created neww possibilities of long distance communication, which allows people across the world to have daily conversation with each other. In the past , it took a great amount of time and effort for family members or friends who live in different countries to communicate with each other as communication was just limited to written letters or telegrams. Nowadays, thanks to the advent of modern technology , people can have interactions by email, phone or video which are as goos as face-to-face interactions. For instance, the appearnce of communication technology provides Vietnamsese parents with an effective tools to talk with their children who study overseas through services like Skype or Facebook, most of which are free of charge or just require a small fee.
In conclusion, while many peope argue that modern communication technology is negatively deteriorate social relationships, I still believe that it has both positive and negative influences on the way people interact with each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2043.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50673854447 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18930611297 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55525606469 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.9291388827 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.928571429 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290128926164 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109285662696 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722505392635 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217001948273 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440161786821 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.