Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why this is the case ? What are the benetfits of travelling to travelers.
It is true that the number of travelers has increased in recent years. The reasons for this trend are varied and in my opinion, travelling brings about several benefits to travelers.
There are two main reasons why more and more peope are able to enjoy domestic and international travel. First, growing prosperity and a rise in the living standards in many countries has enabled people to have numbers of fascinating experieces of exotic cuisine and culture that they could never have before. For instance,with greater disposable income, travel expenses in some famous tourist destinations such as Venice, which were once considered to be excessively exorbitant, are now becomning affordable for many Vietnamses people. Second, the cost of travel has reduced significantly owing to the increasing competiton among tour operators. For example, thanks to the advent of budget airlines, most people are able to travel across the world in the shortest possible time with cheaper prices.
In case of both domestic and inernational travel, there are clear advantages to the travelers. First, they can gain valuable experiences of exotic food and enjoy the richness of ufamiliar destinations. For instance, when foreign visitors come to Vietnam, they will have a chance to use chopsticks, enjoy not only traditional meals but also the rich historical heritage of Vietnam’s temples and traditions. Second a trip other parts of their own countries or to another nation also gives travelers countless opportunities to have thorough insight into people from different ethnic groups and different traditions. With a great deal of knowedge acquired from travelling, those tourists would possess a golden selling point to work for foreign enterprises, especially those who highly value company culture like Japan
In conclusion, there are several reasons why more people are travelling than ever and this trend certainly exerts positive influences on travelers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48344370861 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88231671752 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645695364238 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0928372519 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305971032992 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108214035458 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761863651133 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22241019832 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113233090461 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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