Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Now days, life on earth is hard to imagine without technology. Technology, simplifies and speeds up majority of tasks which we do. Today, a human being is using technology twenty four hours in a day, with technology our day to day tasks accelrates and work which use to take months or years to finish in olden times, now takes only few hours or mintues.
Transportation means are one of the biggest blessing of technology. In ancient times to go from one city to another use to take many days, and today going from one country to other is possible in hours. For example, buses, cars, trucks, airplanes etc made traveling around the world very simple and faster. With faster transportation, food and other other items can be provided to people who are living unreachable parts of earth.
If we looks around, machines are everywhere, 70% of the manual tasks are taken over by machines. If we just look at our kitchen only, we see so many tachnology items, frize, gas stove and grienders etc. which make our cooking much more easier than beofore. No need to grind wheat to make bread, everything is done by machines in mintues.
If we look at our medical industry, now saving human life is easier because of technology, so many medicines, operation techniques evented, which can cure human body from serious aliments.
There is no doubt, sometimes technology fails and cause serious issues or sometimes some people technology hard to use and they might say technology makes life complicated. For example, for old people it might be difficult to learn new technology and use in day to day life.
Therefore, in conclusion, life without technology is not possible, technology is blessing is accelerating tasks, and doing mundane tasks, which saves time for people and they can do some other more important task. It can be complicated sometimes, but looking at its advantages, complications may look small.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-four
...oday, a human being is using technology twenty four hours in a day, with technology our day...
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Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... to day tasks accelrates and work which use to take months or years to finish in ol...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., now takes only few hours or mintues. Transportation means are one of the bigg...
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Line 3, column 117, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...nt times to go from one city to another use to take many days, and today going from...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: other
...r. With faster transportation, food and other other items can be provided to people who are...
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Line 5, column 7, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'look'
Suggestion: look
...g unreachable parts of earth. If we looks around, machines are everywhere, 70% of...
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Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...enders etc. which make our cooking much more easier than beofore. No need to grind wheat to...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cure human body from serious aliments. There is no doubt, sometimes technology ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 322.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94099378882 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71111609068 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583850931677 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2804561356 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4375 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143574128852 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503424189286 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473251392653 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074623164989 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348225226371 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.