people now a days work hard to buy more things. this has made our life
generally more comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been
lost on the way to such materialism.to what extent do you agree or disagree
with this statement.
It is certainly true that the current lifestyle of the people has evolved drastically towards luxury life. Actually, people are affording to purchase extra things which they are not in need. With this kind of attitude, they are getting compromised with the roots of tradition and culture values. I firmly agree with this proposition here.
firstly, individuals are busting their busts to afford costly items in order to get self-satisfaction.They perceive that purchasing luxurious things brings them a certain acknowledgment of respect. They feel proud for their possessiveness otherwise they do feel lost in society. for instance: Letters are the traditional way of communication to talk each other. they stand for one's feelings.One of my friend whose background is very poor, she hardly passes her month through her wages, purchased a mobile worth of Rs.10,000. she stopped writing the letter instead she pings me seldom.This example illustrates how human beings are curbed materialistic things.
Secondly, culture and tradition are deeply rooted in a social framework, where human relationships have greater importance to play in one's life. But, they are no more have value, people are craving for buying power. To attain this power they are undertaking corrupted ways to earn money. A business man is increasing their cost of the product to make money. To illustrate, in education wing, nursery child charged with huge amount worth of Rs.1,00,000. this cost leg and arm for a middle-class family to afford.
However, some individuals among these type of circumstances also, they are able to maintain a core balance between tradition and culture and materialistic possessions.
Finally, I think that craving for materialistic things changed the people's mind to compromise with ethics and values. It requires a lot if dedication and encouragement to maintain a balance as such.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39661016949 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11050152941 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633898305085 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9563528589 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4444444444 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12820266605 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436481086773 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401853681375 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0673051814349 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430839180125 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.