today people spend their most of the time at workplace. as the world is changing so quickly the demands for survival also changes very fast. for example in olden days people used letters for sending messages after that we used telephone and now we use mobiles. the expenses of mobile also become one of the important expense of month. to complete the demands in this rocket speed world people have to work hard and they didn't get time to relax themselves and enjoy the life. secondly now their are nuclear families and both husband and wife are working. when both husband and wife work for whole weak and at the end of weak they were busy for their household works. this busy routine makes them frustrated and unhappy. in a joint family so many works divided in different members of the house which make each and everyone free for a while. in the past people don't have technologies so the competition was also not so tough. people were happy with their own work. today people work hard and hard and busy in competition with others not with themselves which build lack of confidence within them, and lead to unsatisfied and unhappy.not only technology changes make people unhappy but the new demands of relationship also disturbs. today each person wants special attention but work is also important so this is also one of the important factor for developing less happiness and less satisfaction in life. so I can say that it's true the world is changing so quickly due to which people now are less happy and also less satisfied.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 269.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68029739777 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3507537162 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520446096654 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5809876484 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9285714286 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34139342746 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125889068984 0.076458572812 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111076887072 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34139342746 0.150856017488 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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