Write a letter to the manager of the television station. In your letter:
Explain why you do not like the current programs.
Describe what kind of programs you would like to see instead.
Explain why these programs are better.
Dear Sir,
This is Peter Pan and I am writing to you to express my grievance with regards to the programs which are broadcasted on your television channel. The programs are monotonous, uninteresting and lack innovation. It would be better if programs are replaced with exciting and absorbing experience for viewers, especially in the evening when people want to watch television after a hectic day.
Most of the programs are opera soaps targeted to a specific audience. However, there are audiences with different tastes who are looking for variety in television programs. For instance, magic show, comedy, suspense, child-oriented programs, documentaries which would be more captivating for viewers of all ages. I am sure viewership and sponsorship will improve too when your channel will relay quality programs. Thus, it a win-win situation for both of us where one will have a choice, other will have the opportunity to increase channel revenue.
I hope my request is logical to draw your attention. Please review current programs which are being aired.
Yours truly,
Peter Pan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...argeted to a specific audience. However, there are audiences with different taste...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34104046243 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8892946641 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664739884393 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1743732084 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162934215034 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628136069487 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389316012995 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115260134253 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498911949466 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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