parent are the best teachers
Some people think that parents are the best teachers to their children. People think that parents are the most closet person to their children, thus they better understand them and teach them. Although I understand their point of view, I believe that parents are not the best teachers. Parents create a close emotional ties to their children, parent expect their children interest to be the same as them, parent try to pass values to their children but values differ from generation to generation.
First, parent may be too close to their children. Parents create close emotional ties to their children. For example, a school may organize an educational trip, but parent may limit their child from going to the trip in the name of safety. Moreover, the school may want to take the children to camping, but the parent may prohibit their child to attend, because they are afraid from getting hurt.
Second, some parents expect their children interest to be the same as their interest. For example, if the parents love science they expect their children to love science too, but what happen if the child love art. In addition, if the parents like to play sports they expect their child to participate in the other team, but what if the children like to read?
Third, parents try to pass on values to their children. Children world today is completely different from their parent world in the past. For example, older parent can not keep with the rapid social and technological changes. Student who has friends in school from different races may find that his parents have narrow point of view. A student who love computer may find his parents did not understand the value of the digital revolution.
In conclusion, parents are important teachers in our lives, but they are not always the best teachers. Fortunately, we have many teachers in our lives. Our parents teach us, our teachers teach us, and we learn from our peers. Books and newspapers also teach us. All of them are valuable.
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- TPO-47 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 60
- working in the same carrer as your parents 70
- TPO-11 - Independent Writing Task Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?Use specific reasons and examples to support you 89
- live in abig city o small town. 60
- cause of harm on earth 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 320, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'tie'?
Suggestion: tie
...chers. Parents create a close emotional ties to their children, parent expect their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, so, third, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91470588235 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3481918981 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429411764706 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9147803878 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5714285714 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1904761905 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.80952380952 5.45110844103 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331393710759 0.236089414692 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131494501359 0.076458572812 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116421775738 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200951880284 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863254473024 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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