parent are the best teachers
Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that the society learn many things to children contrary to this popular belief, there are still those who argue that the family is best place for children growing. I, to a great extent, agree with idea that parent are the best teachers for children.
First and foremost, it is obvious that parents are a real friend for children. At different times, everyone has diverse friends. Usually, the friendship age of Many friends are less than few years, this issue causes that trust to everyone is be very hard. In the many cases, children who are a better relationship with their parents, these children will be prosperous and important people in the future at society. The effect of parent’s behavior in the confidant of children is very important because cowardly people who were suppressed by parents in childhood. For example, one of my friends is very successful despite lack of being supported by his family.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that the family have very effective experience in life. The advice of parents absolutely influences children’s life in the future. Consultation with the parent in the different aspects of life such as marriage, getting a job and education can be very helpful for children. Unfortunately, the lack of powerful relationship in many of families between parent and children causes people and society going to bad condition. One of the disturbing effects of this weak connection is upon the culture of society. The poor dependence of family together Increases of the percent of crime and stress between people.
Finally, yet importantly, nobody cannot deny this issue which parent want the best future for their children but accepting of this issue at the youth time is very strange. Society’s conditions usually affect the manner of young people.
On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convinced that the environment of home is a best place for learning of elemental subjects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...e still those who argue that the family is best place for children growing. I, to a gre...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... issue causes that trust to everyone is be very hard. In the many cases, children ...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...nvinced that the environment of home is a best place for learning of elemental su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, still, for example, such as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15501519757 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80862576903 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547112462006 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8840013541 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7647058824 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41176470588 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219112587708 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746113598669 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103024466796 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130449104214 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067438232367 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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