Because computers can translate all languages very quickly and accurately, learning a foreign language is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Although technology had a rapid and vast development in recent years, it could not be an appropriate replacement for all human needs. There are several reasons why a group of people believe that learning foreign languages is still an essential need for everyone. Computers can easily handle lots of difficulties, but they are not perfect tools for communicative targets such as traveling, working, etc.
Firstly, learning a foreign language gives you the chance to find a decent job in an international company. For working in such places, where communicate with well-known companies all over the world, a computer translation wouldn't be beneficial since you should cope with others online or on the phone. In addition, in the working meetings you will miss the chance of sharing your ideas with others.
Secondly, computers' translations are not accurate enough. People of different cultures usually have some slang or idioms that are known among the people of that culture and they are not recognized by the machine easily. If someone uses the exact translation that is done by the computers, this will lead to some misunderstandings. Finally, Achievements of scientific researches support the fact that learning a new language can be beneficial for human's brain.
To sums up, people can use computer translations without spending time and money to learn the language but this cannot be beneficial in all situations. In order to communicate better, it is essential to be familiar with the language.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... over the world, a computer translation wouldnt be beneficial since you should cope wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26970954357 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98558602912 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614107883817 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2872143984 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.833333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233434393136 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855726383779 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726556913877 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146406354742 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032456650881 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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