Whether or not people work part time or full time from home is widely debated with many people claiming that working from home has no benefit.
In my opinion this argument merit serious consideration and I will explain why in this easy with pertinent argument and example. There are myriad of argument in support of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that, walking from home make increases the risk of laziness for some parent as a result there become unfit because of immobility.
Another, pivotal aspect of my argument is that it increase their risk of Oedema and diabetes unlike those working from office that are always moving around from one office to another.
For instance, underpinning the aforementioned an empirical of my argument is that people will start lying because they work from home, they will want to spent more time with their family than focuses on the job that they are paid to do from home.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that there are more advantages to working in the office than from home. This shows that the benefit of working from office are too great to be ignored. Nevertheless the advantages of working from home should not be overlooked either.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 2, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
Whether or not people work part time or full time from...
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Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
Whether or not people work part time or full time from home is widely debate...
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Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...Whether or not people work part time or full time from home is widely debated with many p...
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Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...rom office are too great to be ignored. Nevertheless the advantages of working from home sho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, nevertheless, so, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80861244019 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42886950346 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55023923445 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7733508646 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.666666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378397703605 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167022347783 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150009996881 0.0667982634062 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235823409628 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16748619595 0.056905535591 294% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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