Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this can not be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.
discuss both views and give your opinion.
Human actions which are carried out in all over the world has irreversible consequences on the flora and fauna. It is contemplated by many people that these deeds are no more controlled by human beings, whereas other are of opinion that sustainable precautions are undertaken to protect these natural living organisms. i firmly believe that strict rules and regulations can really bring friendly environment.
There are a plethora of reasons that why people assume that the activities carried out by human beings can not be curbed. Firstly, demand for the basic needs of a man to survive in the environment indulges him to harm the plants and animals. Secondly, to live a life to a certain extent, man has been constructing the roads and developing the transportation system by deforestation of thick forest.However, these essential requirements are on the side of the increase in demand without which he could not step a forward. hence people would believe that it is impossible to stop the deeds of human beings who are harming the ecosystem.
on the other hand, people who are very much keen in contemplating the sustainability of flora and fauna pondering that with certain steps of precautions these problems can be ruled out to an extent. Although roads are constructed we can still avail the space that has been left on the either sides of the roads to plant the trees. This will enhance the greenhouse effect by reducing the global warming temperature which in turn ensuring the safety and survival environment to natural flora and fauna.
To reiterate, even though human beings are polluting the environment still with certain authoritarian rules policies and regulations we can still create a sustainable ecosystem.
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...eings who are harming the ecosystem. on the other hand, people who are very muc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, still, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1554770318 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98478454927 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540636042403 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.8536401808 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.9 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224130591803 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887747789856 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726090742989 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1353760935 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272805327164 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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