Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:

The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Despite bearing some similarities, the differences between traveling alone and traveling with a tour guide are remarkable. In my opinion, it is best to travel with a tour guide for several reasons. In the following paragraphs I will point out the importance of a tour guide.

First of all, tour guides are often educated in the field of tourism, therefore, they have adequate knowledge on how to treat tourists. Furthermore, they have a comprehensive knowledge of all historical sites, their stories, and cultural values of the local people. In this regard, they engage on providing tourists with a great deal of information about a site they are visiting. Only by listening to a tour guide, can we find out about the real stories behind the exotic and quaint sites.

Moreover, tour guides not only speak the local language, but they also speak several international languages. For this reason, they can provide tourists with updated information with regard to historical buildings, new findings, excavations, and heritage. Also, they can solve any conflicts between tourists and local people, or any missconceptions, as well as defend from tourists' rights. For instance, we were being ripped off in our travel to Thailand if it was not for our tour guide who helped us.

Finally, not to mention the fact that existance of a tour guide for visiting some places is mandatory, would be an oversight. There are some places that are sacred, such as temples, that require a monk to guide tourists within the temple. Furthermore, some other places are perilous for tourists to visit alone. For instance, if a person is to visit mount Everest, he should hire a guide with whom he can climb the mountain.

All in all, having a tour guide have many benefits for us when we are traveling. Tour guides have complete information, they speak several languages, specially the local one, and they can take us to see places that are otherwise impossible to for us to see.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96363636364 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76319108587 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536363636364 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6154207714 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.3529411765 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128728559944 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523785162815 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478906046776 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895800603159 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667914598058 0.0645574589148 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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