When computers first appeared on the scene, it was thought they would make us more productive in providing goods and services, smarter and possibly happier. Skeptics claim that the opposite is true as computers have proved disappointing in terms of productivity, and have made us less happy and more stupid because information is not knowledge.
Which of these points of view do you agree with most? Support your argument with reasons and/or examples from your own experience and observations.
The impact of computers on our productivity and general happiness has always been the source of controversy. The essay will discuss why computers are helping us positively in our daily work and life.
On the one hand, computers are great tools to support human in multiple areas. With their super fast computation power, they are irreplaceable in sciences and businesses. For example, weather forecasting would not be possible without the help of computers. For personal usage, computers offer us better ways of learning and entertainment. Thanks to the internet, all information and knowledge can be easily looked up, store and distributed. With their multimedia supports, music, movies are now accessible everywhere at the finger tip.
On the other hand, it is true that computers can also be the source of problem to general productivity and lifestyle. Gaming, chatting and browsing of social networking sites can distract people during working hours, as well as disconnect people from physical interactions. However, they are just some side effects of wrong usage and addiction to computers.
In conclusion, despite of some negative impacts, the benefits that computers bring us far outweigh the drawbacks. In my opinion, computers are helping us more and more in every aspects of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38235294118 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9137281292 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.6004538354 50.4703680194 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.4615384615 104.977214359 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.25397266985 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197507298462 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683190848563 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471742039582 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118141247844 0.151781067708 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312814907976 0.0609392437508 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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