Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
From my perspective view, people have always needed to have knowledge to make a better move and understanding their surrounding. As a matter of fact, I totally agree that people must read different news resource. To be a well-informed person, we should not rely on one source of news and I explicit my opinions through the following paragraphs.
In the first place, what I put on my priority is knowledge. The knowledges are combined of experience that we gain and news that we watch or read. We need information to get updated and be informed about subjects that we like. These days people can reach to a large amount of resources like TV, radio and newspaper also we can check the news online. Thus to be a well-informed man, it is better to have various sources to give us more information.
In addition, when we informed by several sources not only we can understand different views and ideas but also we can figure out the author's points and his broadcasting company's political and economical affiliation. For example, NBC News has a democratic views and Fox channel is extremely conservative.
Another noteworthy that should be addressed in this ongoing explanation is education. According to the latest research in a political department of California South University, 82 percents of the people that use more than one news source are educated. This research shows how people eager to learn and this gave them the power to think and analyze data.
To sum up, although many sightless people disagree with the statement, taking all the considerations and factors into account and carefully analyzing all aspect, I assert that to have an extensive knowledge about topics we must read more than one news sources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...aper also we can check the news online. Thus to be a well-informed man, it is better...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, thus, well, for example, in addition, as a matter of fact, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 289.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9723183391 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89392948905 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598615916955 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.737592947 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.642857143 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206595719754 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694865066109 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631724501356 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11016433441 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650515313607 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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