What do you think the government in your country should do to make your country more successful. Place your views in no less than 250 words.
Government in my country is elected in a democratic way and hence strongly and dedicatedly work to make the country and its people more successful. Their is a strong need to reformation of old policies and strict implementation of rules and regulation to make country prosper.
To embark with, India is a democratic country where government is of the people, by the people and for the people. Its aim is to main equality, liberty and justice. However, inequality and unjustice still exists because of poverty, casteism and illetracy. Government should take some measures to eradicate the above mentioned factors. For example, More government school should be open and they should check that proper education is given in these schools. Also, government should take some strict action againt corruption. One major step in the form of GST is already taken to control the corruption. Consequently, Economy of the country will increase and it will become more successful.
Secondly, Government must keep an eye on pollution and population control. They should make strict rules for immigration as done by USA to control the population. Also fine should be imposed on vehicles creating pollution. Moreover, Government should work towards the infrastructure of the country. It can improved by better road quality, flyovers etc. Thus, all the improvements demands a major in the old policies and rules are the betterment of the country and to make the country prosper.
To conclude, success depends on various factors. It is quite essential to have strategy and plans for the development of the country. Government should not only deal with the present situation but should also take decisions for the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a democratic way" with adverb for "democratic"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
Government in my country is elected in a democratic way and hence strongly and dedicatedly work...
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: There
...country and its people more successful. Their is a strong need to reformation of old ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... done by USA to control the population. Also fine should be imposed on vehicles crea...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'improve'
Suggestion: improve
...e infrastructure of the country. It can improved by better road quality, flyovers etc. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25182481752 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87066706433 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543795620438 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0323155511 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.7368421053 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4210526316 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203907867598 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586385950766 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539986959462 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128795875437 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493322420674 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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