Computer technologies are more accessible and cheaper, as the result, more adults work at home and children study at home. Is this a positive or negative development?
In recent years, it is true that more and more people work and study at home instead of traditional ways because of computer technologies’ development. While I tend towards the viewpoint that the reality is negative, I would have to discuss partly positive sides.
On the one hand, the improvement could bring some benefits on both individuals and society. Firstly, adults work at home might have more time for their families with e-commerce. In addition, that thing will help parents in parenting and the relationship between them and their children will be better. Secondly, children could have better behaviours and easily avoid in meeting social evils when they study at home with technologies’ control. Furthermore, working and studying at home will reduce environmental pollution from means of transport and people will safer because they can protect their lives by diminishing traffic accidents.
On the other hand, computer technologies’ progress may not always advantaged, some drawbacks still exist. In the first place, the most important reason is that people might waste time on computer’s utilities instead of focusing on their works. In reality, some adults admitted that they were tempted by computer technologies because they did not have the control of managers. In the second place, making friends is a hard challenge for kids who study at home and the problem might lead to bad results when they growth up. In particular, computer development make a child in home study can not only have some lacks of knowledge and experiences, but also be more faint-hearted or heatless than others who have the same ages. Finally, humans have more difficulty accessing the internal information when they are at home than others work at companies then they loss their high performance.
In conclusion,although computer technologies’ evolution is essential in this contemporary world, from my point of view, this improvement will brought negative effects to people’s life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ead to bad results when they growth up. In particular, computer development make a...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , although
...their high performance. In conclusion,although computer technologies' evolution i...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
...my point of view, this improvement will brought negative effects to people's life....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, it is true, in the first place, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44408945687 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18496862635 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578274760383 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5597370344 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.714285714 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.2142857143 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407963896572 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134212043167 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10695187941 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24015847653 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785264850174 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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