Computer technologies are more accessible and cheaper, as the result, more adults work at home and children study at home. Is this a positive or negative development?
The forth industrial revolution has facilitated the affordability and accessibility of technological advances, making more and more people work and study remotely. From my perspective, while this trend exerts certain positive effects, it leads to more negative ones.
It is true that performing work and study online shows several benefits. The major positive effect is that this trend can allow people convenience. In fact, employees and students can customize their schedules as long as they can have their tasks done without having to stick to customary office and class models. Another benefit worth mentioning is that computer-based working and studying cannot be affected by uncertainties, such as civil unrest or pandemics. The adoption of virtual learning and working has proven its advantage during the Covid 19 outbreak. When many countries have descended into lockdown, businesses and schools, adapting their employees and students to digitalised operations, have appeared to continue to thrive.
Conversely, there are some drawbacks of Internet-based working and learning. The first disadvantage worth mentioning is that people may have specific soft skills weakened. In fact, they tend to spend more time overdosing on screens, exchanging information via texting and emails, than engaging in in-person interaction. This means that their communication skills may become rusty. Furthermore, due to staggered active times, people tend to finish designated tasks independently rather than brainstorm with others, thus, there would be little teamwork spirit at work and school. Another drawback stems from the fact that people may fail to maintain their productivity when working or studying at home. Even though remote working and learning can allow people flexible time, it seems difficult for them to stay disciplined. Indeed, they tend to procrastinate due to the temptation of social media, entertainment activities as human nature. Thus, they may struggle to achieve their desired results. Eventually, working and studying online can be subject to technical disruptions.
In conclusion, working and studying on virtual platforms can have certain advantages.
However, my firm conviction is that this trend can cause people’s interpersonal skills, productivity to deteriorate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1913.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64306784661 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90114357376 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592920353982 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 339.0 20.2975951904 1670% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1913.0 106.682146367 1793% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 339.0 20.7667163134 1632% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 110.0 7.06120827912 1558% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216457860549 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.216457860549 0.084324248473 257% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120703438391 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908435622852 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 174.6 13.0946893788 1333% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -281.07 50.2224549098 -560% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 136.7 11.3001002004 1210% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.91 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.48 8.58950901804 297% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 137.6 10.1190380762 1360% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.7795591182 547% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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