Some people think all lawbreakers should be put into prison, while others believe that there are better alternatives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Curently, the criminal problems is the top concern of either family or the sociaty as well. It is universally believed that the offenders should be served long prison sentences for the part of their crime, while others claim that there are still an alter ways to tackle this issue. In my perspective, it depends on what serious crime is to decide to punish.
On the one hand, I would argue that the most effective way to reduce crime is to implement a policy with zero tolerance, especially for those with commit a serious offence such as wildful murders, trading drugs or raping women and children under 18. One reason is that a person who commits a crime would understood that unlawful actions take a serious consequence. If government apply the stricly policies by lengthen the time in jail, it would act as a deterent to tackle rising crime. Thus those offenders are no longer a danger to society and people can walk through the street more safety
On the other hand, i consider that in order to deter criminal effectively, government must not follow policies which are soft on crime. Instead of having impose a harsher punishment, authorities can give them an opportinity to rehabilitation by opening an educational programmes to provide prisoners skills and qualification to find work after released. In addition, in school, students should study some aspects of law which affect their lives. having some knowledge of laws, they can prepared for themselve to avoid situation which may involve in risk or become a victim.
In conclusion, I believe that prison sentence are one essential weapon to fight against crime, but there are more measures to reduce this issue without being punishment
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, then, thus, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98596491228 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66695289323 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635087719298 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5193774036 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.181818182 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108032420327 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380094122081 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467179683143 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708606592082 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367140401712 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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