Nowadays the crime rate among young people is increasing. Why do you think this is happening? What can be done by parents and teachers to reduce it?
Criminality as a means of power has become common in our society and for this reason, criminal activities are happening frequently which attractive the juveniles very much. I think, less leisure time activities is the main reason for this, at the same time, moral crisis is another cause. Father, mother and an educator can take various initiatives, such as encouraging to take part in various sports such football, cricket etc., and motivate them to do good deeds, showing examples of good people who are morally strong, to get rid of crime problem.
Primarily, sports are important for the mental growth of a child and generally, it is found that in modern time young children are passing their time by playing video games which is not good for proper psychological development. For example, if a child plays football in the field with other children then he can learn many things and he gets the capability to differentiate good and bad things. But, in case of playing video games, generally, it’s not possible to get that environment. When this child becomes a young man, he fails to become socialize and thus, crime activities take place. So, it important to have more field based past time activities.
On the other hand, in the society immoral people are generally rich and getting more and more highlights, for this reason, it creates the image that if one is moral, he will not be wealthy and will get the attention. For example, politicians in many countries are not morally strong and involved in various criminal works but able to achieve significant portfolio of the state. Youth loves to follow them and it creates crime in the society. For this reason, it is significant to set or publicize the images of morally strong popular images which will be inspiration for young blood.
Finally, leisure activities and proper ethical education is important to refrain the young people from criminal activities. Parents and tutors have a great role in this regard as they are the first idol for a child. I believe that if it is possible to promote these things effectively, then there will be less crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 371, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'encourage' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
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Line 2, column 639, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
..., it important to have more field based past time activities. On the other hand, in the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, then, thus, for example, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90807799443 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61361207955 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526462395543 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9400456411 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.466666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137815258089 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477633755921 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299464719121 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092638791175 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028001693148 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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