These days, behavioral issues among students in high school are an inceasing problem. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?
Concerns over discipline, recently, are considered as the serious problems belonging to students in post-primary schools. This essay explores the causative agents for this as well as proposes some possible solutions.
One of the main causes of this problem is that most high-school students are reaching the age of purberty. Because of the changes in anatomy and metality, they are undoubtedly in a tendency of being extremely sensitive to everything surrounding, especially their friends and teachers, which might lead to the misbehaviours. For example, students fool around more when they sense that their teachers have no idea of what he or she is doing. To tackle this issue, both parents and educators should pay more attention to their children as well as give them a sense of respect for teachers.
Secondly, instead of doing outside activities, students prefer staying at home with their computer or smartphone, and sometimes, they uninventially access the inappropriate information. This causes students to be distracted and play up, moreover, those unsuitable information is able to increase the negativity inside which might result in the students' depression. The way forward might be to encourage them participate in social and physical activities rather than surfing or chating. Additionally, to promate what students access, parents should set up the firewall considered as the information filter.
A third issue is relating to study under high pressure, or extracurricular activities on the school timetable. Students necessarily require a respite from their hectic study schedules, unless, the presure they are under can puch them to hit a peak of tolerance, which tends to misbehave or rebel. In this issue, it is essential to look for a balanced school timetable - one which gives them the suitable break so that they can regularly do physical activities and give their mind a needed rest.
In conclusion, the students' negative behaviors would be the growing concerns if parents and teachers do not have any accurate solution in terms of moral orientation. The high-school age is the vital period that dratically influence to the rest of students' life, so the educational method plays an important role in the development of the next generation at all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 344, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...tivity inside which might result in the students depression. The way forward might be to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33426183844 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00610361608 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58217270195 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8704972383 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237638242483 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079531038022 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508457902938 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128628345425 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273993814914 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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