The first pie chart illustrates the average proportion of energy usages in a typical Australia family while the second one shows the percentage of emission of greenhouse gas from this energy consumption . Overall, water heating consume the highest of proportions of total energy usages and greenhouse gas emission in Australia.
In more details, Australian use the most energy for water heating with under a half while heating and cooling systems require 20% energy. Refrigeration follow closely with only 7%. In contrast, cooling and lighting only make up a mere 2% and 4% respectively. In terms of use energy for other appliances account for 15% of total.
Similarly, a third of greenhouse gas is emitted by water heating. ㄘGreenhouse gas is emmited by heating and refrigeration come next with 15% and 14% respectively. Meanwhile, just under 10% of total greenhouse gas released by cooing and lighting. Finally, greenhouse gas is require by other appliances with just under a third of total emission.
In conclusion, it is clearly to note that water heating consume most of energy and emit the most greenhouse gas in six households in Australia.
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 45
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 89
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? 56
- The graphs below show the percentage of household energy used and the amount of greenhouse gases produced in Australia. Summarise the information making comparisons where relevant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...enhouse gas from this energy consumption . Overall, water heating consume the high...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, similarly, third, while, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3152173913 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18847449619 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527173913043 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9625707386 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168584878139 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075469266396 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049729980486 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111665683118 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04368844333 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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