In recent year, more and more government in different countries try to invest more money for rail infrastructure. However, I complete disagree with this idea, and therefore I believe the government should spend our taxes in other transportation infrastructure, such as roads.
Some people would argue that it is a good decision since they believe that every citizen in the country should be encouraged to take more public transportation, especially trains, for preventing environment deteriorating by reducing production of greenhouse gas and air pollution particles. Nonetheless, this is not always correct. It is true that we can try to reduce air pollution by taking more public transportation. Some other pollution, however, would be produced while the railways are built. Furthermore, constructing more building of train stations is needed with the increasing number of railways. Therefore, some natural land would be destroyed in the process of building these stations and the environment would be irreversible for a long time.
In addition to the environmental factor, taking trains is not always convenient for every resident. For example, people who live in high mountains, where railways are not easy to build, have to rely on road to go out. If our government spend money only on construction of railways but not roads, it is not fair for these people who also pay for taxes.
In conclusion, I totally agree with government should encourage people to use public transportation frequently and they should take responsibilities to establish safe and convenient transportations. However, I don’t think invests more money only on rail infrastructure is right, while which type of transportation could be invested should be assessed accurately.
- At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit during the same two periods 68
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 89
- Many people believe that international tourism has negative implications on their countries What is the reason for it What can be done to change the negative attitude towards international tourism 43
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49632352941 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33054755816 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3105376095 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178156052265 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067332122264 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073088112904 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123244427569 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591266773649 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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