You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much.
Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also suggest any improvements to make things better.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to express my satisfaction about a party I had last Saturday night in your restaurant. If you are wondering which exact group of customers I am referring to, I can tell you we were the guys and girls dressed as the characters of "The Godfather" movie.
I really desire to thank you all for your kindness and the attention you gave us. Especially, I desire to make you know about the wonderful service of Dody and Diana, your waiters. They were always present when needed, ready to have fun with our jokes. I would also like to point out the extraordinary quality of...
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Thank you very much, I hope
Thank you very much, I hope to arrange a similar letter at the Ielts test, next Saturday.
Kind regards
You are welcome! Good luck
You are welcome! Good luck for the IELTS test.
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