Dear Mr. Salah,
I attended your course in Java programming which was held in Mansoura in November. I am writing to ask if it possible to send me a reference letter and I hope it would help me to get a job.
I have recently applied for a software developer in one of the biggest technology company in Egypt. Have you heard Of ABC Company? They accepted my resume and I am preparing to do an interview next week. As you know, I have finished my university last year and this job will become my first step in the programming career. In fact, being a programmer is my dream from childhood.
Therefore, I would be grateful if you wrote this letter and mentioned my academic performance that will help me to improve my chances to get the job. In addition, they need full name, phone number and email address to contact you.
I look forward to your prompt response.
Yours sincerely,
Ibrahim Mohamed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, therefore, in addition, in fact, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59509202454 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63819374622 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662576687117 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.417914037 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0909090909 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201525129086 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677132455495 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415867472096 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112245518484 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359737621777 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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