schools should prepare students for university rather than work.how far do you agree with this statement.support your point of view with reason /or example from your own experience or observations.
in this day and age,the issue of aim of scools has sparked a heated debate.while many support this idea that schools should prepare students for the university.a substanial number of people are against this perspective.I am inclined to agiants this idea .This eesay will illustrate both views.
For one, it is commonly accepted that the main task of schools is prepare students for university.For example, reaserhers in Tehran University undertook a study to investigate the children who are more sucssesful at their lesson at university.The result revealed that most of whom are studied in more famous schools. The relationship between sucesefull graduted student and thier school wae statistically significant.As a result,scientific research supports the hypothesis that school shuld focuse on preaper students for university.
However, it has some drawbaks as well.In other words many developed countries do not need more educated workers because thier market labour need more handsun workers. From my own experience , a group of social scientists from Harvard University found that a lurge number of uneducated workforce would open new door to privent the illigal imigeration and refugies problem. The more uneducated students are ,the less imigeration workforce would be.
to recapitulate,after the analyzing the issue , I strongly believe that schools should consider both side of view and prepare students for market labor and higher education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, while, for example, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 219.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66210045662 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13969115871 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662100456621 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.8583535012 50.4703680194 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.142857143 104.977214359 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2857142857 20.9669160288 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.25397266985 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.33497536946 337% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218906564049 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928455736564 0.0925447433944 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478472475965 0.071462118173 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126125138453 0.151781067708 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288644432812 0.0609392437508 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 12.6369458128 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.09 53.1260098522 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.9458128079 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.14 11.5310837438 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.94827586207 201% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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