For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school.
Although a certain conclusion cannot be made, in spite of all undeniable merits of stud
ying hard in school, I firmly concur with the idea that social skills is necessary for being successful in our occupations. The following paragraphs will substantiate the most outstanding reasons.
First of all, one should take into account this significant fact that sociable people who can communicate sufficiently with others in their job environment feel much better. As a matter of fact, their efficiency due to suitable relationships enhances exponentially. They overcome difficulties during their works by making constructive relationship with their co-workers and costumers. To illustrate, one needs only to refer to the number of prosperous people who achieve their goals via making a cordial setting in their works. To demonstrate, most of the scientists all over the world contend that developing interpersonal skills helps people to promote their position swiftly. So they established an experimental program worldwide to estimate the effectiveness of having friendly relationships in work on people’s efficiency. The results are surprising: over 90 percent of prosperous businessmen keep their work environments friendly and behave with people so kindly.
In approaching this issue, apart from the fact mentioned above, one should regard another subtle point meticulously that due to high number of graduated people in different fields, it seems so difficult for them to find an appropriate job in their favourite field. Most of them have almost same skills and information in their majors. The determining element in this occasion is having social skills. The modern offer abundant examples of people hired because of being skilful in communicating with people with different perspectives. A noteworthy refreshingly intelligible statistics, revealed by a recent social research in our country, show that nowadays companies prefer to hire people who in addition to their expertise in their major, are totally expert in making friendly relationships with customers.
Being sociable is vital to everyone to survive today’s tough life. Taking all aforementioned arguments into account leads us to the conclusion that we should contemplate about attempting hard to obtain social skills beside educational ones. Having better communication in our working environments not only heighten our chance to find a suitable job but also help people to progress dramatically.
- parent 73
- Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities. 70
- In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age. 60
- Some people believe that when busy parents do not have a lot of time to spend with their children, the best use of that time is to have fun playing games or sports. Others believe that it is best to use that time doing things together that are related to 76
- TPO 12 - It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.test sth 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'recent social research'.
Suggestion: recent social research
...ly intelligible statistics, revealed by a recent social research in our country, show that nowadays comp...
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Line 5, column 401, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o help people to progress dramatically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2108.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66666666667 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17488937357 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1458633842 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8823529412 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58823529412 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108943601849 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335180782672 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323693648776 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0650803736885 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417417216829 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 11.7677419355 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 10.9000537634 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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