When talking about the way to travel around, people have different opinions. Some people prefer to travel in a group with a tour guide. Others would like to travel alone. Personally, I think the best way to travel is the first one. To begin with, I have to say during my 10 times experiences to travel abroad, there is only one time that I went on a trip in a group led by a tour guide with my parents. The rest of the experiences I traveled alone. So why do I still agree with the statement that the best way to travel is in a group with a tour guide? Here are some reasons.
First, a tour guide is full of knowledge about a tourium place such as national parks or museums. Instead of reading articles and books about a national park before a journey, a great merit for a tourist is that all he has to do is do nothing but listen to what the tour guide introduces. It makes a trip easier and more relaxing. What's more, if you are really interested in the history of the national park and did the survey, there is someone you can discuss with, the tour guide! Take me for example, I used to do lots of homework on the Internet to understand a place better before I visited. By this way, I can learn more about the history of the place. However, it takes me a lot of time to survey. On the other hand, when that time I traveled with a tour guide, I found he knew the place more than I did. I was so excited and asked abundant questions to him
Secondly, a tour guide always knows where to buy the cheapist sourvenir or get more discount. Since the tour guide has been doing his job for many years, he knows a place better than we do. As a result, he will know which store is friendly to travelers and which store take advantage from travelers. In addition, the tour guide can bargan with local language. Take my mother for example, when we went to Denali Park together, she wanted to buy some honey, but she did not speak English. Our tour guide help her get 20 percent of discount. My mother was very happy and gave the tour guide 10 dollars as tips.
In conclusion, despite there may be some people disagree with my idea, I think the best and easiest way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide because a tour guide is helpful.
- TPO-28 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- It s difficult for teachers to be both popular well liked and effective in helping students learn Agree or disagree 50
- TPO Integrated 49 76
- TPO 21 integrated 80
- Some parent offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school Do you think this is a good idea?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
... makes a trip easier and more relaxing. Whats more, if you are really interested in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, as to, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, talking about, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17592592593 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24879463979 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474537037037 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9177761616 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4347826087 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7826086957 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.39130434783 5.45110844103 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282789251273 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893033531721 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937994402968 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19699059888 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0934795343397 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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