Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is a quote I appreciate saying "love what you work until you can work what you love''. People argue about whether to start a job even if it is not your goal or to wait for the one you dream of. For me, I'm totally with the side supporting exploiting the opportunity and beginning the available job. In this essay I will demonstrate my reasons for that agreement.
First of all, gaining experience is a paramount cause for this. We have to make the best use of any job we are engaged in. This allows us to be expertise in the field we desire. This can be added to the resume in order to enhance our career and open the door for better job opportunities in front of us. Experience is cumulative and nothing is useless, may be the job that we start now represents the first step on the way to our goal. For example, if someone wants to work as a biostatician, he can start with working as a research assistant in a center for medical studies until he gains the experience needed to specialize in biostatistics field.
A second exquisite reason is that we have to earn money to make living for us and our families as well. Besides, we can use the money we earn from this secure job to take courses and earn a degree to increase our qualifications. We should not stay without working just waiting for the perfect job to come to us. We have to struggle and fight for it. From my personal experience, I could do that. After graduation, my goal was to work in teaching at the university, but I could not get what I wanted then. I found a job as a pharmacist in a community pharmacy and decided to work in it without hesitation. I managed to save some money that allowed me to take courses and start my masters degree in pharmaceutical sciences. Now, I'm working as an assisting professor in school of pharmacy in Egypt and finally, I achieved my target.
Lastly, time passes rapidly and does not wait for anyone. We must exploit every minute to our favor as the jobs that are available for us now may not be present when we are older.
In the summary, we have to work hard in an available job till we find the job that we will be satisfied with. Several motives can encourage us to do that like having experience, making money and making the best use of our time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, if, lastly, may, second, so, then, well, as to, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35294117647 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59036703656 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491764705882 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1822263778 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4347826087 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4782608696 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47826086957 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239180036182 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770063019712 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482427193099 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15257405715 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399439322307 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 10.9000537634 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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