tpo-46
From a general point of view, no one can cast doubt on the fact that today celebrities' opinions are very determining and draw attention from a wide range of people. With this in mind, it is not surprising to notice that like all prominent issues, some of its facets are subject to discussions and debates. For example, which range of people is giving more respects to the opinions of celebrities has been a subject of controversy. One popular idea in this regard is that famous peoples' opinions are more important to younger people than older ones. I personally concur with it. In what follows, the rationale for this opinion will be elaborated by focusing on 2 reasons.
One reason worth mentioning here at first is that younger people are more interested in celebrities than older people and they follow celebrities' works and opinions very intently. It goes without saying that young people have more leisure time and less serious concerns. Consequently, they can spend more time on reading and following the news about celebrities. This fascination makes young people influenced by the celebrities' opinion. For instance, my cousin who is a 12-year-old boy is very interested in movies and follows the lives of all Iranian and Hollywood actors. Their opinions are of paramount importance for him so that his parents think their roles in his life is less than the role of Brad Pit.
The second reason that occurs to my mind is that older people experience a plentitude of events and adventures in their life. This more experience makes older people's believes so established that they are reluctant to change them. If someone's idea is so firmly, they will not be interested in other's opinion even celebrities. My father is a good example that shed light on my opinion. He is a 60-year-old person that has lived in different countries during his lives and saw a lot of famous people from all over the world. He always blames me for my interest in football soccer players and said I should my own opinion regardless the celebrities' views.
In conclusion, it is more judicious to say that famous peoples' points of view are more important for younger people than older ones not only do young people more follow celebrities' lives but also old people's opinions are so firm that celebrities' opinion are not interesting for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 418, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
...on makes young people influenced by the celebrities opinion. For instance, my cousin who is...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'celebrities'' or 'celebrity's'?
Suggestion: celebrities'; celebrity's
...o old peoples opinions are so firm that celebrities opinion are not interesting for them.
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87121212121 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67177326133 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8839531873 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.526315789 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8421052632 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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