Some people think that we should keep away from others to improve our relationship, because being away from people reminds us of how important they are. Others think we should always stay with others to have good relationship because we can communicate with them more often. What do you think?
Since the dawn of civilization human beings used to live in groups and society. It is beyond doubt to mention the importance of relationship as one of the most crucial parts of each and every human's social life. Many people believe that we should keep away from others to improve our relationship, while others think it if we want to have good relationship we should stay together with others and communicate with them more often. I personally contend that staying to close to people may one day spoil any relationship and it is better to keep distance every once in a while so that people would know the value of our presence much better. In what follows, I will explicate some of the most outstanding reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that when you are too close to people and when they have access to you every day you will become a part of their daily life and they cannot sense the importance of your presence very well. There is no doubt we should help our friends in case of difficulties and we should communicate with people but when we are always there they will not appreciate our presence. Take a personal experience as an example, my younger brother and I were not only brothers but also good friends since childhood, but as soon as we grew up our relationship little by little grew short and as soon as I moved to a new city he understood the value of my presence close to him.
The other prominent reason is that as soon as you keep your distance from people they will miss you more. There is an old saying that says absence makes the hearts grow fonder. Although this style of relationdship may have some disadvantages it has this great benefit that when you show yourself in your friendship after a while, your friends will appreciate you a lot more.
The last but not the least important reason is that when you are too close to people although it is a great chance to communicate with them, they may think you are always curios about their personal life and you are peaking nose in their lives so in this case the relationships may be spoiled quiet easily. A recent survey has shown that majority of people believe that they should keep their distance from their friends in a way that their relationship would not interfere with their personal lives.
To cut the long story short, based on all of the enumerated reasons one can conclude that although communicating with other people is an important factor in having good relations, it is important to know it may spoil relations quiet easily as well. I personally highly recommend that if a person wants a good relationship he should always keep his distance from his friends in a way that his relationship would not be taken as curiosity by mistake.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, well, while, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 9.8082437276 214% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2259.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60081466395 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54258368017 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.435845213849 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.2355105123 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.6 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7333333333 20.6045352989 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.41195480425 0.236089414692 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138372337811 0.076458572812 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156695032187 0.0737576698707 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235212518343 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123997181421 0.0645574589148 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 11.7677419355 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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