Do you support dangerous activities like extreme skiing, skydiving, bungee jumping or not. What are the reasons for that?
It is irrefutable to say that dangerous activity has buergeoned to become important. Although it is as throghouly both constructive and positive, this sports can have profound adverse effects on people. I am inclined to highly believe that it to quite determine and should be impeded. This essay will elucidate pros and cons dangerous activity.
There are myriads of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that dangerous sports such as skiing, skydiving and bungee jumping can leads to physical problems. For instance, to measure the effect of advanturous sports on reactions problems, a recent scientific research conducted by Yazd University has shown that these activities would influence of diseases such hearts disease. Therefore, it is proved that dangerous sports can cause to depression.
The other predominant reasons dangerous sports is disturbing body. For example, to understand the relationship betweebn risky activities and stress situation, the result of a study research by Tehran University researchers revealed that dangerous activities is correlated with performance-enhance-drug. Hence, it is evidence that these sports could impress on life-threating.
To conclude, there are several compelling argument at side, my personal sentiment is that drawbach far outweigh positive.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 31.9359605911 66% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 201.0 242.827586207 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79104477612 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27168809206 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 139.433497537 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65671641791 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6936290104 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.818181818 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170045036295 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583510942431 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052730772363 0.071462118173 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864073597575 0.151781067708 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588154178343 0.0609392437508 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 11.5310837438 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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