In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from different news sources

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...trengths and weaknesses. In my opinion, i agree with that to be well informed per...
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...ree with that to be well informed person ,he need to collect information from many...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much different news', 'a good deal of different news'.
Suggestion: much different news; a good deal of different news
...on ,he need to collect information from many different news portal. I fell this way there are two m...
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...on ,he need to collect information from many different news portal. I fell this way there are ...
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...s way there are two main reasons, which i will explore in the following essay. ...
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...ith, when a person to be trustworth, he have some quality such as read daily news pa...
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...pers and looks for every news that have happen recently. If this person is not know th...
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Suggestion: known
... happen recently. If this person is not know the actual news and he is capable of pr...
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...s and he is capable of provide fake news , which is harmfull for our day to day li...
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...ch is harmfull for our day to day life. he need to be honest and careful about all...
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...experience is the good example of this. i have a friend who study with me in my u...
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... with me in my university. And i and he are the close friend. Once i went to my hom...
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...And i and he are the close friend. Once i went to my home for emergency call from...
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... home for emergency call from my parents . During this time the university campus ...
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...al area there was no net connection and i was unable to know the news from campus...
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...asked some this about campus situation. he told me that all of ok. When i got into...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s situation. he told me that all of ok. When i got into my dormatory i face lot of p...
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...uation. he told me that all of ok. When i got into my dormatory i face lot of pro...
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...all of ok. When i got into my dormatory i face lot of problem. I think my friend ...
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...think my friend is well-informed but he cant read the campus news daily and this new...
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...think my friend is well-informed but he cant read the campus news daily and this new...
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...isplay all of about campus. But my luck i escape from the diffucalty and suggest ...
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...l, that will help this a good reporter. When a person want to be a reporter he may b...
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... of information about the recent event. As i was a well informed person that every...
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... information about the recent event. As i was a well informed person that everyon...
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...rite good news for people. At this time i was awarded as campus top well informed...
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... top well informed reporter. When first i saw some news about a event then i awai...
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...orter. When first i saw some news about a event then i awaited for confirmation f...
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...irst i saw some news about a event then i awaited for confirmation form other kin...
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...f people who always read my article. If i make fake news without jistify, it will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, so, then, well, i think, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28132387707 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40538496225 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458628841608 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3389233873 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0740740741 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.5376344086 542% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267087780549 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775306601254 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880896784122 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17382367762 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115198312726 0.0645574589148 178% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 11.7677419355 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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