whether getting married before graduating from school or before getting a good job is widely debated. Although, many people are claiming that is better to get married before graduating from school or getting a job.
Ultimately, this notion merit serous consideration and i will explain why with pertinent argument and examples. I strongly agree that graduating and getting a good job is better before getting married. Marriages comes with lifetime partner, peace of mind, happiness with someone to always talk to whenever you are distress.
However, there are also big problems associated with marriages such as lack of freedom, unresolved argument, fighting and financial difficulties especially when there is no job. Another, pivotal aspect of my argument is that education is physically, mentally and emotionally challenging. This can have detrimental effect on student.
For instance underpinning the aforementioned, an empirical is that research has proof that 98% of student are unhealthy, diabetics, and unfit to live a healthy life, as a result of stress associated with academic work that never stop knocking at their door. This made me to ask if student cannot take care of their academic pressure can they take of marital issues or crisis without a job? Honesty, the answer is no.
In view of the argument outlined above one can conclude that the benefit of graduating and getting a job are indeed to great to be ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whether
whether getting married before graduating from ...
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Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s notion merit serous consideration and i will explain why with pertinent argumen...
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...stance underpinning the aforementioned, an empirical is that research has proof that 98% of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 231.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21645021645 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8363469863 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627705627706 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7274184147 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.416666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247483034496 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098920928652 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141372887364 0.0667982634062 212% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135692638148 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134077565069 0.056905535591 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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