The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
There exists no optimal scale to measure the greatness of the nation as it’s dependent on relentless factors and context, which conspicuously comprise of economy, science, arts and social assessment. By asserting that a country should be judged purely based on the achievement of a particular social groups, it results in the lack of an encompassing view on the matter. From my perspective, Sampling representatives of selected fields, despite its low validity, could be a good approach to examine the development of a society in special situation, for instance, during war time and social reform. ...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...actors and context, which conspicuously comprise of economy, science, arts and social asses...
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Line 1, column 306, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'group'?
Suggestion: group
... the achievement of a particular social groups, it results in the lack of an encompass...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... and financial welfare conferred on the general public. If a country's employment rate is...
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Line 5, column 703, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ple yearn for. China would not consider a 'great' nation for same-sex c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, similarly, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 58.6224719101 138% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2871.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 538.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33643122677 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14448098614 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53531598513 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 911.7 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4714493796 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.95454545455 5.21951772744 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151998517646 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477098787292 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351891864154 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880022838391 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282180491783 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 171.0 100.480337079 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.