In this and age, for some people, a good holiday is spending time in a convenient and fun place or country, other group interested to travel to the places with different nations and learn about their living style. For the purpose of this essay, I would discuss how far I agree with travel to see nations and historic places.
To begin with, there are various reasons for traveling through the country to see ancient communities and places. At first, In every country, there are variant people with diverse foods and clothes and also their own accent. In some of the communities, you can live among them awhile and experience their living style. For example, in Iran, there are many clans in different parts of the country such as Lor, Kurd, Qashqai and agreed with tourists to live among them and do their daily works like shepherds. This kind of journey is cheep and charm.
Secondly, for those travelers who like to see the other countries, go to historic countries with ancient places and cities and learn about their past empire can make a dreamy holiday. For instance, Pizza Tower and Venice in Italy are ancient places that attract many tourists from all around the world every year.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling debates on both sides, my personal sentiment is that travel to see people traditions and living style and also historic countries make a good holiday for us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 8.36945812808 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 241.0 242.827586207 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81742738589 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28800458101 2.71678728327 84% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560165975104 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6753202133 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.1 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.9669160288 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9 7.25397266985 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288327572251 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113168041332 0.0925447433944 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552360030485 0.071462118173 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178365914334 0.151781067708 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280654352 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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