Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products?” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
Over packaging has been a controversial topic over the last decade. While some great people believe that it is the producers' responsibility to avoid over-packaging, the considerable number of individuals who stress that consumers must take some actions in order to avoid over-packaging should not be negligible. This essay will discuss both these views from a balanced perspective.
On the one hand, those who believe that it is producers’ responsibility to avoid over-packaging have their own respective reasons. These people usually cite the fact that if anything creates a problem, we should put a halt to it from the beginning. In this way, manufacturers are causing the problem and as a result, they have to avoid over-packaging in order to sell their products. Therefore, producers as the main reason for the issue should take responsibility and act wisely.
On the other hand, it is not nonsensical to say that consumers are also affecting the way producers exhibit their products. As a matter of fact, in today's modern life, which people try to show off, most individuals spend a great deal of money on a product that is packed in glamorous boxes which only used for making the product more luxurious. Thus, consumers as the targets of manufacturers should also be blamed for over packaging.
In conclusion, over-packaging should be avoided by both consumers and producers. And this essay discussed both these sides. In my opinion, over-packaging can be prevented if consumers and manufacturers share a collective responsibility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'producers'' or 'producer's'?
Suggestion: producers'; producer's
...ome great people believe that it is the producers responsibility to avoid over-packaging,...
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Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...amed for over packaging. In conclusion, over-packaging should be avoided by both...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, as a matter of fact, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.75862068966 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26720647773 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32356362497 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546558704453 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.65517241379 246% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5429361078 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.076923077 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.25397266985 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306354282668 0.242375264174 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110927923232 0.0925447433944 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817589171896 0.071462118173 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190577638244 0.151781067708 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487792774779 0.0609392437508 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 55.0591133005 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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