The tables bellow show result of a survey of urban resident's opinions related to various aspects of life in 1980 and 2020
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
The diagrams illustrates how the six aspects of life are through urban resident;s judgment from 1980 to 2010.
Overall, it is evident that while shops, healthcare, transport system and accomodation were received more possitive judgments, whereas the qualification in term of education , environment reduce significantly according people's opinions. In addition, the number of citizens who give opinions with medium judgment for all fields decresed sharply.
On the one hand , there is a considerable rise in food feedbacks in term of four different domains consist of shops,healthcare, transport system and accommodation. The number of good opinions for healthcare in 1980 was 64 and increase to 83 in 2010 and become the field received the biggest number of possitive judgments.Meanwhile, shops and transport system had more possitive judgment and also less negative opinion with 81 and 67 good judgments respectively in 2010. Accomodation showed a stronly rise in possitive opinion from 56 in 1980 to 65 in 2010. However, the bad opinions about it also increased to 18in 2010.
On the other hand, people reaction become worse in both education and environment. Education was judged as a best service in 1980 and then become worse in 2010 according resident's opinions. The number for good judgments of environment decreased from 72 in 1980 to 64 in 2010.
In conclusion, while many aspects received more possitive reactions , education and environment was given more negative opinons.
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- The consumption of the world’s r to resources ( oil, and water ect.), is increasing at the dangerous rate. What are causes and solutions? 56
- The tables bellow show result of a survey of urban resident s opinions related to various aspects of life in 1980 and 2020 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant 91
- The world’s natural resources are being consumed at an ever-increased rate. What are the dangers of this situation? What should we do? 56
- In many country, a small number of people earn extremtly high salaries.Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.Discuss both these views ad give your own opini 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 3.97073170732 428% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4329004329 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20767135572 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536796536797 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.780419387 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.090909091 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0901040156976 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423117239013 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401980839443 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587962099616 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403004063698 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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