Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Personally ,I disagree with the statement, Parents are the best teachers.Because of having lack knowledge in multidimensional area like science and technology and arts and having lack of time for guiding step by step in my preferred area, I disagree with the statement.
Though, every parents have desire and wish to be in good position , it difficult for them accomplish the role of best teacher because of having lack knowledge in broad areas.In today's world, people inventing new thoughts and ideas for the betterment of the individual life and for the advancement of the society.We have to be updated ourselves to this new inventions and thoughts and ideas so that we become aware of this change.If we could not update ourselves,it is difficult to know the new thing which are developing in our world.So we need subject-wise advanced teacher for advanced knowledge and information in the different areas.Similarly,art is also a important area of development of individual.Including language, there are many areas to know about arts.Without depth knowledge in this area,teacher can not guide their children properly as their need.For example, music,if the the teacher don't know music she/he might not be able to guide in this area as the children need and desire.
Also, though parents have a desire to guide their children , they could not due to their lack of time, because they have to do their job when the children need help and support. For example, when children return from school and it is the time for study, at that time parents still engaged in their job and may not be able to give time for their children.
In conclusion,Though, parents have have desire to become best teacher for their children,due to lack of broad knowledge in various areas and lack of time the parents could not be able to become best teacher.
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Sentence: Though, every parents have desire and wish to be in good position, it difficult for them accomplish the role of best teacher because of having lack knowledge in broad areas.
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Sentence: If we could not update ourselves, it is difficult to know the new thing which are developing in our world.
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Sentence: For example, music, if the the teacher don't know music she/he might not be able to guide in this area as the children need and desire.
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Sentence: In conclusion, Though, parents have have desire to become best teacher for their children, due to lack of broad knowledge in various areas and lack of time the parents could not be able to become best teacher.
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