Human lifestyle is pampered in the lap of technology. Currently, the trend of using modern technology for every work is gaining prevalence among youngsters. Few masses assert that excessive usage of computers and mobiles leads to worse condition of interpretation and inscription skills of children.Here, i would like to accord with given statement.
There are manifold points to shore up my view. First and foremost, the excessive use of social sites on cell phones and computers is responsible for making poor writing skills. To demonstrate, youngsters prefer to use short cut words, slang and abbreviations while chatting with friends.Beside this, they want to write speedily and make many spelling errors during writing some massages. Thus, writing standards of juveniles are getting to be inferior when they use computers and mobiles excessively. Moreover, in this Hi- tech era auto correction software are available for correcting the spelling mistakes . hence,these types of software on cell phones and laptops demotivate teenagers to learn the spelling and definitely it will lead to worse writing skills of youngsters.
What is more, presence of smart classes puts detrimental effect on writing skills of teenagers as they make their assignments, projects and files by typing the content instead of writing. Therefore, they are forgetting the worthwhile skills of writing. Furthermore, earlier youngsters amuse themselves by reading the magazines, newspapers and articles but nowadays teenagers like computers and mobile phones for entertainment source. Eventually, interest towards reading is declining at alarming rate and children lack in reading skill who use modern technology for every purpose. By contrast, others have conflicting views.
They argue that, computers and cell phones enable them to access a wide range of online books and educational websites. Consequently, their standards of reading can be enhanced while using these smart technology. Apart from it, the availability of numbers of software can improve their writing skills because they can learn new vocab words essay writing skills by visiting these software which uplift there standard of writing .
To recapitulate,undeniably computers and mobiles help youngsters to improve their vocabulary and others strategies.However, i still believe its negative outcomes outweigh its positives. Therefore, teenagers should not these types of technology excessively .
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Essay evaluation report
Therefore, teenagers should not these types of technology excessively .
Therefore, teenagers should not use these types of technology excessively .
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 367 350
No. of Characters: 2029 1500
No. of Different Words: 212 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.377 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.529 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.78 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 163 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 129 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 96 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 64 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.389 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.188 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.611 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.299 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.526 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.055 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...getting the worthwhile skills of writing . Furthermore, earlier youngsters amuse t...
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...muse themselves by reading the magazines , newspapers and articles but nowadays te...
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...t these types of technology excessively .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, apart from, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71038251366 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97277145963 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584699453552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5945878015 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2631578947 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73684210526 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 41.0 5.01903807615 817% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229976546464 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682965267099 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515841416696 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124861485253 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406757827442 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.