Modern innovations of antibiotic, computer and airplane, which one is the most important and why?
Nowadays, the question “whether modern innovations, such as computer and airplane are important in our lives or not?” has become a long-running dispute among people all over the world. It is a widely held view that technology is highly beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must weigh up carefully the pros and cons of this issue.
To begin with, it is a common belief that modern innovation plays a vital role in our society. First and foremost is that we are able to save our time consumption as a result of multi-tasking features of computers. Secondly, it can be argued that computer had been a multi-purpose device that can be used in a wide variety work, such as education, medical, and in a job in order to present your achievements by video conference. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that computer is an essential component that an extensive range of surgeries have been carried out remotely. A group of scientists, working at prestigious university conducted that by computer science doctors have been able to enhance their performance in medical fields.
However, there is no doubt that modern technology like computer provides people with various negative views. It should be taken into account that the majority of crimes rooted in computer and subsequently the Internet. Moreover, elderly find innovation so complicated and prefer to use old methods. For instance, doing bank affairs by ATM devices that is one of the advanced devices that proceed from computer technology is excessively demanding for the old generation.
To recapitulate, I entirely agree that some efficient actions must be taken into consideration in the field of computer science. However every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23355263158 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02745795094 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611842105263 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0135767599 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.384615385 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161861484047 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522299815579 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342651748095 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895070812757 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414339167598 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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