Polygamy has led to massive divorce rates around the globe. Give the possible option for this issue and various solutions to reduce the rate.
Nowadays. The crisis of polygamy that leads to divorce has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the world. It is a widely held view that taking an informed decision can be so beneficial, whereas I tend to believe that one must formulate an accurate policy to address this challenge as well as numerous solutions must be proposed.
To begin with, it is a common view that having a safe and secure family without polygamous nations plays a vital role in each society. To put into consideration, I express why I support this idea. First and foremost is that those men who seek other young women to have multiple partners collapse their families and subsequently, the earlier woman get dejected. Secondly, it can be argued that polygamy leads to mismanagement of resources, hiking in expenses, inheritance disputes, and jealousy among family members. In addition to this information, it should be mentioned that the majority of polygamous children are suffered from psychological and emotional disorders. A group of socialist, working at prestigious university conducted that an extensive range of divorced children are tempted by delinquent people and persuaded to commit a crime.
However, there is no doubt that the government should eliminate the divorce rate by various key solutions. One possible solution is to raise the women’s public awareness by encouraging them to participate in compulsory educational sessions. Moreover, it is essential to make aware women about their rights to take a wise decision.
To recapitulate, I entirely believe that some efficient action must be taken into account. However, as every garden may have some weeds, the local authorities are recommended to enforce some strict legislation, and the individuals are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...lygamy that leads to divorce has become a long-running dispute among the public all over the w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are hoped to heighten their intellect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, in addition, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34965034965 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02561318997 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63986013986 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4188748878 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.692307692 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110474041331 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363652619138 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438604984493 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0616444117858 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460547471629 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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