Our global diaspora is broadly segregated into two halve, oriental and occidental. There are bound to be differences in social, economical and cultural front as well. Therefore, the issue weather equal numbers of male and female students in every subject is no exception and irrefutable. There are advantages and disadvantages associated with equal number of male and female in a given subject. Ultimately, I opine that universities should accept equal numbers of female and male students in every subject. I will explain why with pertinent argument and example. there are myriad of argument in favor of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that university should try to consider gender equality irrespective of male or female.
Another, pivotal aspect of my argument is that male and female are almost equal in every industries on earth today as such, equal number should be consider in all subject.
Furthermore, underpinning the aforementioned an empirical aspect is that today we have male and female pilot, engineers,doctors and even drivers. If equal number is not consider how do we get all this qualify professionals? However, some people believe that female number should not be consider as that of male because they think that female education ends up in the kitchen.
Although, the situation seems dire, but there are several steps we can take to make tangible changes. Firstly, federal and state government should join task force in implement a law that promote equal number of female and male in every subject. Secondly, university should try and promote gender equality to make it easy to have equal number of male and female in every subject.
To conclude, i would like to say that although equal number of male and female in every subject is highly beneficial but we must be prudent to strike a balance, logical and rational approach toward, the same for the optimal and fruitful outcomes of efforts or utilization of resources.
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 85
- Nowadays modern gadgets are widely used by young people and the use of these products reduces their creativity.Do you agree or disagree? 55
- Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. 67
- Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there 81
- Some people believe that government wastes too much money on space exploration and research while there are still many problems on earth. To what extent do yo agree or disagree with the view. 38
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 8.36945812808 263% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 319.0 242.827586207 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11598746082 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 3.92707691288 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81195590982 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514106583072 0.580463131201 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 379.143842365 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8678939629 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444066408657 0.242375264174 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165462338515 0.0925447433944 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153476887553 0.071462118173 215% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262646917124 0.151781067708 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854564973404 0.0609392437508 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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