The pie charts below shows average household expenditure on 6 different items in a country in year 1950 and 2010.
Summarise the information and make a report by selecting main features and make comparisons where necessary.
The two Pie Charts illustrate, information regarding average expenditure of a house on 6 different categories in a country in years 1950 and 2010.
Overall, housing which comprise three fifth (75%) of total budget in 1950 decreased to only one fifth (25%) in 2010. In 2010 food expenses made most of the budget.on the other hand healthcare remained the least priority.
To begin with, in 1950 housing contributed 72% of average household expenditure, and education about 6.6%. Both of them decreased overtime with housing showed significant decline of 50% in 2010 most amongst all, while education with a minor decrease of 0.3 percent.
Furthermore, in 1950 citizens spending on food, transportation and other were 11%, 4% and 3% respectively.The figures rose to 34% for food which was most by any category about 20%. Whereas, transportation and other figures went up 15% and 11% to end up 19 and 14% respectively .Health expenditure inclined by 2% during this time least of the increase.
- The first chart below shows the results of a survey with sample the cross section of 100 000 people asking if they travelled abroad and why they travel for the period 1994 to 1998 The second chart shows their destinations over the same period Write a repo 63
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. 73
- The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.Write a report for university lecturer describing the information shown below. 56
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.What do you think are causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them. 84
- The table below shows the figures of imprisonment in 5 countries between 1930 and 1980 Write a report for a University lecturer describing the information shown below 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, regarding, whereas, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13580246914 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02600122809 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66049382716 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8273946128 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 5.23603664747 221% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165117958943 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868799057695 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109426255342 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127559514664 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128583079059 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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