Do you think consumers should avoid over packaged products , or is it the responsibility of producers?
It is irrefutable to say that, this era gravitate toward the packages product. Many opine that, the products should be packaged by the retailers. While other believe, its the responsibility of the producers to look after their product till it reaches to the consumers. This eaasy will discuss inevitable reasons on both the sides ad deduce to a reasonable conclusion.
To begin with, almost every product in the supermarkets are packaged beautifully and packaging has hampered the beauty of the product and made the product unhygenic as well. Almost all the food items wheter they are frozen foods or the beauty product are packaged with unnecessary wrappred an most of the time what is mentioned in the packaging are false. Due to excessive packaging we consumer might be mislead.For instance , yesterday i buyed a shampoo from a supermarket it was beautifully packed with ingredients mentioned but later found out that it hadn't mentioned about peanuts and i am allergic to it. It is the result of mismanged packaging.
On the contrary people on the other side of the fence assert that, when the producers are responsible for the delivery of their product to the consumers they can see the satisfaction in their consumers. The conumers can directly talk with the producers about the product and can discuss both the negative and positive feedbacks. Furthermore , this might also reduce the myriad amount of money the middle man earns and producers can solely benefit from their production.
To recapitulate, consumers should be careful while choosing their product as it is difficult for producers to deliver their products directly to the consumers. Over-packaged product might not always be the best as they might mislead the consumers. So its the responsibility of the buyers to select products carefully rather than focusing on the package.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'packages'' or 'package's'?
Suggestion: packages'; package's
...say that, this era gravitate toward the packages product. Many opine that, the products ...
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Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... by the retailers. While other believe, its the responsibility of the producers to ...
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Line 1, column 325, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sides'' or 'side's'?
Suggestion: sides'; side's
... discuss inevitable reasons on both the sides ad deduce to a reasonable conclusion. ...
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Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... are packaged with unnecessary wrappred an most of the time what is mentioned in t...
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Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... packaging we consumer might be mislead.For instance , yesterday i buyed a shampoo ...
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Line 2, column 424, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e consumer might be mislead.For instance , yesterday i buyed a shampoo from a supe...
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Line 2, column 555, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...s mentioned but later found out that it hadnt mentioned about peanuts and i am allerg...
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Line 2, column 589, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...at it hadnt mentioned about peanuts and i am allergic to it. It is the result of ...
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Line 4, column 341, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tive and positive feedbacks. Furthermore , this might also reduce the myriad amoun...
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Line 6, column 252, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...as they might mislead the consumers. So its the responsibility of the buyers to sel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, well, while, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88052255699 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1790595747 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.785714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294989067603 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107397705328 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638985063143 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18862776779 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04697833662 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.