Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
universities and colleges are places that should make people ready to face real life by giving them the chance to experience a variety of activities and consequently, turn them into more skillful and stronger person who is able to encounter difficult circumstances and overcome difficulties. furthermore, people usually go to university for different reasons. so all of them would like to find university a suitable place which helps them to meet their needs and achieve their goals. there has been a heated debate as to whether sports, libraries and so forth should be upheld equally or not. I personally believe social activities and sports are as important as classes, and they should be taken into account same as each other, but it is nothing to do with the amount of budget that should be allocated for them. the reason behind this thesis will be aptly elaborate in the following paragraphs.
first of all, although classes and libraries are by far the most important part of a university which leads to students progress, they are by no means the only way that improves life level and problem-solving abilities. in other word, sports and social media play a crucial role, too. there's a super connection between healthcare and learning ability, so students should be supported in both of this ways. if universities lose sight of this important point, it'll affect not only the future of these students but will have an irreparable effect on society.
the second important point is that but is possible to build a volleyball salon, tennis salon, swimming pool and so forth with the same amount of budget which use to build a class or libraries? absolutely providing sports equipment need to spend more money than constructing a library or social media. so universities should bear the cost of every item based on its specific features.
in conclusion human, as a complicated creature, for having a satisfactory life, can not turn a blind eye to joy, challenges, competition and so forth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, so, as to, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.996996997 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82245221515 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603603603604 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9763300702 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.857142857 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.5376344086 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218546952989 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680456313987 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369654578563 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11045221317 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.064710850625 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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