People who smoke facing several illness issues even they chose to smoke despite knowing how it is harmful. People who do not smoke, want smokers to pay more for healthcare. In this essay, I will discuss this interesting topic and provide opinions.
Smoking cigarets or cigars cost many lives across the globe every year, as the number of victims increasing every year, costs of their treatment inpatient or outpatient rapidly growing and affecting our healthcare system. “Smoking kills”, it is generally known. Kids in primary school are educated of serious sicknesses, which smoking causes. However, most of them experienced cigarets in young age and keep smoking all over their adult life. Nowadays, when kids start smoking in young age, our healthcare providers treating more younger patients than before.
Smoking affects all body parts and causing a range of sickness. The most dangerous is a lung cancer or throat cancer. People with this disorder demand on intensive and expensive care from specialists, who could spend their time in research or treatment of sick people whom illness have not been caused by cigarets. In end-stage of lung or throat cancer, the majority of patients ending up in Intensive care units, where a day of treatment valued more than 5000 dollars a day except their expensive medication. These people also block intensive care beds for another patient awaiting surgery or so.
To conclude, treatment of smokers significantly affects our healthcare system and moving money into it. In my opinion is absolutely fair to pay smokers more for their medical treatment as they put themselves at a risk and aware of its consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'younger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: younger
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23420074349 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66558045529 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639405204461 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.9653975094 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181833751349 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598069644249 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475280862967 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110044480528 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271988220665 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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