Talk about the pros/cons of this era as is full of daily inventions
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about innovative lifestyle. While it is possible to claim that innovating in a fast pace is good for our society, my view is that the disadvantages overweigh the advantages. In this essay, I will explain my point of view by analysing both pros and cons of daily inventions.
First of all, there are several reasons why new inventions are bad for people. One of them is the internet which most of the people waste a huge portion of their lifetime on it. Additionally, it can be argued that the people are less happy because of the distractive nature of internet. For example, scientists have proved that screen time of a person is reversely proportional to his happiness.
Those who argued for the benefits of new inventions, have a different view and said that it will actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that the new inventions are helping the society by helping and supporting everyday lifestyle. Then, there are concerns about technology addiction which is challenging the modern society with the huge waste of man-hours and increased in world’s energy consumptions.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my opinion is that technology brings negative impacts on our human life. I would strongly recommend that governments must review and filter the topic researches in order to reduce their impacts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 20.9802955665 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02136752137 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81529237157 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594017094017 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8879798362 50.4703680194 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.9166666667 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108195318033 0.242375264174 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361841677111 0.0925447433944 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631253901488 0.071462118173 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571731554957 0.151781067708 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585240205003 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 55.0591133005 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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