Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this? Discuss with appropriate examples.
Those days, there is an ongoing debate between people about monopoly of shopping mall. While there are defences on small local shops that big supermarkets are replacing small shops, my view is that this condition is created due to the request of our society. In this essay, I will describe my points of view by analysing advantages and disadvantages of replacing local stores with supermarkets.
First of all, there are many reasons why supermarkets are more popular than the local shops. One of them is that a huge variety of goods can be obtained in the shopping mall. Additionally, it can be argued that the goods available in small convenient shops are limited. It should also be taken into account that local shops cannot compete the resources and management system of the supermarkets.
Those who argued for small convenient shops had a different idea and said that it will actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that small shops are required to be protected because they are small and medium enterprises and small and medium enterprises play a very important role in the country’s development. Then, there are concerns about systematic approach of shopping malls to monopoly the markets.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my opinion is that large supermarkets will be completely replaced the small shops in future. I would strong suggest that local convenient shop owners should find a way to start corporate business with supermarket for their sustainable business development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13147410359 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81965338846 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541832669323 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.0 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8704222028 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287886187793 0.242375264174 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106867981442 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052400063132 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174693228869 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540509152276 0.0609392437508 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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